1/16/06

Opening Scene

So I pumbled into the re-write this morning and it took me a lot longer than I thought it would. well i should say that i didn't get as much done as i thought i would. i only got to page 5 sheesh. but i added a scene and cut a lot. the opening scene i added after the credits i think ads alot to the film. i atually go right from the credits to meeting the officers. it used to go from the credits to meeting Jared, Colin, and Brandon. but i think this works better as the cops essentially interact with everyone. right now i'm about even with the two lengths. five in the re-write and five in the second draft. i'm gonna put a couple hours into it tonight.

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